Despite the focal point resting at almost dead center, the eye naturally travels around a good deal of this image. I think it was a wise idea to tone the text down to some of the mids you have painted here, it keeps that element from commanding too much of the image while giving the viewer's eye an excuse to travel to the bottom right corner, keeping everything moving. If this piece is meant to express vastness or focus on the deep field, I would think this piece complete. If you could pull some of the nebula out toward the viewer, you might be able to expand the depth of field. Awesome piece and excellent work!!!
I created it using photoshop CS3 and some hubble space telescope space images from google images and blended them together and used some brushes that iv gotten here and there, I'll put the link of the pictures in the description, Thanks for the feed back